This is SOO helpful! The writers I love the most have fantastic detail in their stories, but I struggle when I try to emulate them. Good tips
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I love the examples used in this article. I always hope that I can create details like these, that keep the reader reading, and let’s them imagine a place or action without clashing with they already had in mind. Thanks for sharing. Makes me want to go write!